Provide script feedback on your first five pages

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Is your script's opening strong enough to grab readers, agents, or producers in the first 5 pages?
As a freelance screenwriter, Film Freeway film reviewer/rater for New York Cinefest and North Hollywood Cinefest, and winner of Best Drama Screenplay at the 8 & Halfilm Festival, I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes.
I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide three structured paragraphs of narrative feedback (1 page), covering:
• Hook and pacing
• Dialogue flow and character voice
• Scene clarity and emotional tone
Delivered as a written PDF summary.

This offer is ideal if you're preparing for:
• Script competitions
• Production submissions
• Studio reviews or funding applications
With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.
No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on).
If you’re ready for professional feedback that’s honest, actionable, and story-driven, check my verified feedback and place your order now.

Credentials:
Best Drama Screenplay Winner – Duality: 8 & Halfilm Festival, Rome
Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween
Selected Short: Separation
Film Reviewer – NY & North Hollywood Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival
Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

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  • Isobel T. 21 days ago

    Great job. Patient with our amendments and speedy responses.

  • Amit C. 2 days ago

    Excellent workby

  • David A. 18 days ago

    Excellent work. I'm very pleased

  • Mike N. 4 days ago

    Great as usual!

  • Erwan N. 7 days ago

    Another perfect job :-)

  • Kashif H. 26 days ago

    Great Work again

  • S D. 29 days ago

    Great work thank you

  • Donna D. 13 days ago

    Fantastic work, followed my brief to the letter and the site looks amazing. Highly recommend.

  • Martin H. 9 days ago

    Quick, flexible and accurate. Good job

  • Anthony O. 20 days ago

    Absolutely amazing experience. worker has the patience of 10 saints. Thorough, creative, quick. Couldn't have wished for a better experience.

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